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Thank you so much for your thoughtful notes and quick turnaround. I have found in the past that few notes are helpful and often those offering them don’t get the story or understand structure and character well enough to provide useful feedback. I found your guidance incredibly helpful. It was succinct, grasped what I was trying to get at, and offered constructive ideas to help me move things forward in the rewrite…You really provided me a solid footing to look at my own script…
Thanks for the notes on my script…I had a chance to look through the notes and I think they look great. I’m going to start to work on the revision right away. I really appreciate your observations and suggestions. They should make for a much better script.
Thank you, David. I will incorporate all of your suggested changes/additions into my query letter. I really appreciate your assistance!
I wanted to let you know 3 months ago my Agent sent Donners’ Film Company a Query letter with my pitch for my crime thriller, ‘Twisted Agendas.’ And, we got the call Wednesday! It looks like they are interested in buying the spec script! I wanted to thank you for your script coverage and the coaching you did for me. It really made a difference in the storyline, etc…
I am amazed at your ability to concisely and descriptively present very succinct notes and positive suggestions that are truly GREAT!!! It shows how much help you are capable of giving to a learner such as myself. I definitely got my money’s worth of valued observations and comments… Thanks for your very professional help.
Thanks David! I can see where to work on my script now!
Brian M. Shaker
… I appreciate you seeing my vision with my intention, without destroying the integrity of the script, just giving me very useful interpretations on the script. Thank you for being honest… to a point where everything you say is incredibly beneficial to me and my future. I completely understand where you are coming from, and how to improve my script.
…You give good notes!
Thank you so much for the amazing feedback and the quick turnaround. Susan & I really appreciate your insights and we’ve already come up with some new ideas/solutions for the script. We’re planning on utilizing your suggestions to improve the screenplay and then focusing on entering the major competitions and trying to find an agent. Wish us luck. Thanks again for your help and we’ll definitely keep you updated on our progress.
Thank you very much for your excellent critical synopsis and coverage of my script. I think just about everything I read is right on the mark… I think you found every weakness in the script. I’m going to go back to work on it…