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Thanks for the notes on my script…I had a chance to look through the notes and I think they look great. I’m going to start to work on the revision right away. I really appreciate your observations and suggestions. They should make for a much better script.
Outstanding. Thank you very much for all of your time and assistance on this. It’s been very educational.
I want you to know that I am thankful for the professionalism and detail of your response. It was everything you had promised and more. I appreciate the candor of the critique and the accompanying suggestions…it was encouraging to know that I’ve found a resource that doesn’t pull any punches and can be an excellent sounding board for future projects.
Thank you very much for the wonderfully inspiring notes on my script ‘Trash,’ and for your kind comments…It really is a blessing to have a sounding board in the writer’s journey.
Many thanks for the terrific critique. Your feedback was actionable, right-on and constructive.
Thank you very much for your excellent critical synopsis and coverage of my script. I think just about everything I read is right on the mark… I think you found every weakness in the script. I’m going to go back to work on it…
Thanks so much for your thorough review of our script. Your comments are insightful and just what we were hoping to receive…
Jenny Deason Copeland
I just finished another re-write of ‘War Crossed Lovers’ which you have coached me on over the recent years. I used your query letter, and had a ‘YES’ in less than 10 minutes. The script is currently in a producer’s hands. Thanks you so much for just being so helpful.
Tom HuckabeeExecutive Producer
David Kohner Zuckerman is one of the best development guys I know. He’s got a great eye for material and good ideas for making scripts better. He’s also tenacious as hell… but not obnoxious, which is a rare combo.
David has a keen eye for story and characters, and the ability to spot solid character driven screenplays with amusing stories.
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