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I wanted to let you know 3 months ago my Agent sent Donners’ Film Company a Query letter with my pitch for my crime thriller, ‘Twisted Agendas.’ And, we got the call Wednesday! It looks like they are interested in buying the spec script! I wanted to thank you for your script coverage and the coaching you did for me. It really made a difference in the storyline, etc…Linda Larson
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David Kohner Zuckerman is:

  • A working producer.
  • A licensed psychotherapist.
  • A published author.
  • A friendly, fun, and casual script consultant.

I’s not whether you need a script coach. It’s “who to choose.” David is the best choice.

David has worked with top Hollywood organizations including:

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The number screenwriting mistake is sending out your script before it’s ready. Doing this can burn bridges, and hamper your ability to make much needed connections. To avoid this pitfall, it’s essential you receive objective notes on your project.

There are many script doctors out there, but what makes ScriptCoach’s David Kohner Zuckerman unique is that he’s a working Hollywood Producer who knows the Biz inside & out. Some of his major credits include “The Fourth Noble Truth, “Strictly Sexual,” “Crocodile Dundee in L.A,” “All I Want for Christmas,” “Caught in the Act” & “Chump Change.” A member of the Producers Guild, David also owns the very popular Virtual Pitch Fest – plus he’s a licensed psychotherapist.

So, if you’re serious about your screenwriting career & want feedback from a seasoned Pro who understands what you need to do to sell your script, you’ve come to the right place. David’s analysis & support will help you make your screenplay the best it can be.

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